Friday, September 22, 2006

Should We Drown To Meet? Comments

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On this bank I,
On that bank you,
Should we bleat?
Or, Should we drown to meet?
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Abhay Mishra
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Tranquil Ocean 22 September 2006

Good one but I felt that the word ' bleat' was not going with the poem....but its yr work n you must have had a reason for putting it there. TO

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