Saturday, December 30, 2006

Should We Comments

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Should we step away, make it a day? ,
lye down and close your eyes,
There would be nothing you would have to say,
just take my hand,
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Aaron Carmichael
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Colin J... 30 December 2006

Liked it Aaron, Open minds and open hearts are all that matter.

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Silvia Thomas 30 December 2006

The last line is really lovely. (you've commented on my poem, so i've decided to take a look at yours ( :) I think there are a few spelling and grammar errors, but for your first poem on this web, it's really good!

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