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2 – There are many lines i enjoyed. Here are some: “Lost then finally found within, dark caves of sound, so deep, and smooth, so rich and throaty, singing music all the time. Never ravaged but by scotch and time and filtered cigarettes.” and: " washed amongst the rocks and foam the wind it blows away" It flows very well. to MyPoemList bri :)

1 – well, FINALLY! one of your poems (always it seems with topic " green" ;) has the word " green" in it. ha ha. i've sent a long comment to James via a private PH message. as usual (though there are thousands of his poems i've not read) i've had trouble understanding this poem, but it seems much clearer than some of his. i had to read several times to appreciate more each time.

Very intriguing, inspiring, insightful piece. Beautifully crafted.