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No one can define pain
i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain
The tough times will pass, they say
But what if there's no hope no bright ray.
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A really good poem... Shows that Ur concerned about the people living in such agony...
A weep without sound, but lure for self death will not justified god is the begining he is the last
Good write up.Well conceived, Pain remains undefined...yet there are plenty of dictionary 'explanation'.10/10.
Words are short to say that you have written this one so wonderfully...... Just touched my heart........ Great job...10+++
there is no spring no atumn then describing heart as rotten a nice message you have sketched from your inner feelings
No one can define pain i only wish happiness and sorrows we could strain The tough times will pass, they say But what if there's no hope no bright ray agreed with your say.. really a realistic approach..10/10
You've expressed your thoughts so nicely.well expressed.Good piece of work.
I like the way you are not scared of saying what you think despite the fact that many will not stand by what you are saying.That was well penned.
Euthanasia is against all the humanbeings..know some countries are not allowing these human killings.. here i want to say that ur central theme is not good but the poem framing is so wonderful..
I am against euthanasia, but the poem is well writen and it is wonderful that you have your own position. 10/10
The pain of pain can be so painful that it sometimes evaporates the very essence of existance. Compelling creativity in dealing with a complex subject! Qualitative questions my friend.
heart yet rains but by blood reeling in pain love for life disowns as blood lose red as the day rills over the black night dew of night accords deep by pangs of dark, most poignant write by the imagery of grueling pain persisting upon the illusion of cure, yet love of life eludes through the furrows of sorrow soul when hinges hanging over the cliff of living, wonderful write by imagery of pain, yet all through ingenuity swooning upon the beauty of grace,10+++++, thanks for sharing
Nice...superb..no need to say this is a good one...clap, clap!
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7/20/2025 1:53:10 AM # 1.0.0
nice one again......