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I've also stood on that bridge and wrote a poem about it...yours captures the thoughts that run through your mind quite well...glad you're still here to write them. Coach

Your poem reminds me of some sad event which happened few years ago... There's a bridge near the place I live - people call it 'the suicide bridge'. Once I whitnesed a man climb up its edge; he was crying. When police arrived he confessed that he didn't want to live, because he had brought a shame to his family by getting terminally ill and not being able looking after them... I wouldn't call anybody who is at the other side 'an idiot'... The man was rescued - he didn't jump and some people offered him and his family help they needed... I don't care what people think about me, so I wouldn't do it. Nice poem. Good job...

Nice! 'Sometimes we think that we are such fools for all our dying wishes when we are starting to appreciate life' Anyway, nice poem you have there! ^_^ thanks for sharing! -GanNi