Should my thoughts be only seen in rhyme
And with a metric rhythm to bind
Devoid of rhyme, will it be a crime
Unfettered and free and unconfined
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Fantastic write my friend.....! Beautifully rhyming! Though free verse is preferred in modern times and rhymed verse looked upon a little out dated, I still enjoy rhyming verse better! Yes, your advice at the end is so sensible....! Pay little heed to what others say, instead follow the bent of your mind! Top marks!
Hi my friend. Good to see you writing and submitting. Keep that wonderful brain engaged. Peace, Kelly
And if you feel your poems' sublime Pay little heed to what others say With or without the rhythm and rhyme Keep composing and do it your way Absolutely Loke! Each one should follow their heart. Compose a poem the way they like. I like the spirit in you that is honest and noble. Should poetry rhyme? Surely, it does in this fine poem. And why not? A full Mark, Loke! God bless!
Thanks Geeta, I accept the honest part (keeping one of my eyes closed when I said that!) But noble? ho ho ho! No! There isn't a noble bone in me. I write only for a bit of fun and to slow my aging brain cells from senility. If others enjoy reading my poems; I'm happy.
Your poem flows carrying a gentle beauty and an encouraging word for the individual creativity of the poet.....beautiful
Thank you Simone, This was one write which I enjoyed very much.