Friday, September 25, 2015

Should It Be? Comments

Rating: 4.5

When you are away my love I wonder,
When all that's left is thoughts of you,
When imprints of your touches fade,
When your scent is slowly coming out off my skin,
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Maphoka Lenkoe
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Young Church Poetry 24 October 2015

No no no don't break it off, he is still your love. Great piece and I love it.

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Young Church Poetry 24 October 2015

No no no, don't break it off. He is still your love. Great poem, I love it.

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Chinedu Dike 01 October 2015

A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry, elegantly penned with insight. For people who truly love each other, ABSENCE MAKES THE HEART GROW FONDER. I guess the adage answers the questions. A lovely poem bristling with wisdom. Thanks for sharing Maphoka. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Maphoka Lenkoe 25 September 2015

thank you, I feel like this is a great outlet

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