Friday, May 7, 2010

Should I Hate Him? Comments

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The goodness in bad will never die
The bad in goodness dormantly lies
Everything bad is good it means
Or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ?
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Aastha Uppal
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Roseann Shawiak 16 April 2014

Astounding poem, simple and to the point, regarding the other side of the coin. The relatives of the criminals, their innocence and goodness compared to the bad ones. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Aranthabailu Ummar 05 October 2011

call for seek to good in bad is good. comparing the careness of the daughter or loved one with the killer is fine. But when it made elaborate for no death for a kill began for more unhumane in our society. To keep out society and people in safety there should be a kill for a killing. crime cannot beglorified

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 August 2011

this is such a beautiful write.simply amazing.liked it.

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Romeo Della Valle 17 April 2011

Sometimes we become victims of circumstances. Nobody is perfect, here in New York City so far more than 10 politicians are doing jail time for corruption after proving their good deeds for years and now they disgraced. Only a man with wide open eyes and without greed can survive cleanly and avoid these missteps in life! Excellent write, well penned and poignant! Love and Peace for always!

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Javed Khan 22 July 2010

I'm highly impressed the way you've plotted the feelings of dearest ones of the criminals....Thatz really amazing..... No one is born criminal anways, it's the circumstances that draw him towards wrong path and no one is bad, it's the attitude of people that compel him to be bad... Nice written.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 15 July 2010

A completely good man is as rare as a completely bad man…Swami Vivekananda said every work breeds good and bad outcome…well absolute Good is that where one has no self interest… very wise poetry thanks sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 09 July 2010

Very interesting perceptive, well written. Not many imagine a monster to most, can be a man to some, even a hero.

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Very strong concept...very neetly expressed..bravo

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Siddharth Singh 10 May 2010

Quite a piece, this one. Profound, sincere and thought provoking.

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Raju Baruah 08 May 2010

magnificent writing with a good theme... The goodness in bad will never die The bad in goodness dormantly lies Everything bad is good it me.... really a profound one...thanks

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Kumud Ranjan 07 May 2010

And today she just has one thing to ask which none can answer- 'Everything bad is good it means or do i need to hate even the good deeds? ? here ends the poem..with a genuine question about the brighter side of a criminal...a sinner though he is he is different for his family...and what you have depicted very lively.. brilliantly written..full of emotion...very nice topic you have chosen too...10++++ from me...

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its a very good peom......keep on writing

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mohsin amin khan 07 May 2010

yours poem is really a great one it is so hard to comment on such a nice poem by words practically if we will see justice then every person should be given justice in this democratic country there have been so many poepl killed innocent and the decisions have not come yet from the paws of devil courts Ajmal kassab i think he is the central idea of this poem histroy will remember him as guilty but dont curse him who ever comments

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Rajinder Singh 07 May 2010

very beautiful poem, very thoughtful.you will make a great poet, keep writing

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 07 May 2010

yeah...i can understand what you feel...but then there are sons and daughters of the victims too....they are sufferring meaninglessly.. but yes, the question you ask is valid, what can we say, everything is so tragic, and heart-wrenching. that baastard should be hannged, thats all i know. good poem, pertinent. wanna see more from you. thank you.

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Afzal Shauq 07 May 2010

A smile rips apart her face As today his teary mother does bakes his favourite cake For it's the death of the bad in her good son Celebrating with the tears of sorrow, a joy; The end of the evil son she never gave birth to Her heart is numb for a vital part of her heart will today be hung thanks for sharing.. this is a meaningful poem. impressive is idea and the way you expressed is professional enough..means you are quite well in writing a good poetry..liked this poem

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