Monday, August 24, 2015

Should I Die Tomorrow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Should I die tomorrow
Lay me with my wife
Shed not a tear of sorrow
For I have tried my best in life
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David Wood
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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2022

David Wood, You are a Prince of a Poet and an authentic and marvelous human being. We are blessed by your presence, poetry and soul.

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2022

One of the most exquisitely sad and beautiful love poems ever written.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 November 2022

Yr marriage reminds of my parents' God bless

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Jayne Louise Davies 11 November 2022

This truly brought tears to my eyes David x A beautiful write, straight from the heart x

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

stanza 4 seems to speak of the past as if you were already 'gone'. I wonder if the poem is a true account of YOUR life when you wrote the poem. Or maybe it is not even about YOU! Good one. : ) bri

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David Wood 11 November 2022

Then metaphorically speaking. Not now though.

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Bri Edwards 11 November 2022

five stars. Have you loved another by now? It's been 7 years. You may do well to love another and still be faithful to and plan to be joined with your first love. bri ;)

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Liza Sudina 08 September 2015

so touching! You had a happy life!

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Valsa George 25 August 2015

This is lovely.... at the same time heart pinching! I admire the lover and husband in you! Such devotion.... such genuineness of feeling....something so hard to find these days! Of course, you will be reunited with your beloved in death.... but as long as you are here, you try to make yourself happy and never destroy your life pining for what is lost! This is the same thing I keep telling Amitava Sur!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 24 August 2015

I never did love another She was the only one for me Your love is pure and you cherish her love. You never miss her, she is always in your heart. Great words well said.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 August 2015

we are searching new destiny really, thanks.

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Sanjukta Nag 24 August 2015

A heart touching poem with a sad note flowing through it......10

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