ctrade,
Insecurity is an enemy
An enemy that is hard to beat
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I don't think anyone can give you an answer. But one thing I can tell you- don't ever feel insecure about your poetry! I think it is excellent! This poem is a ten.
i would ask her to love herself...for her she is the most important thing on earth...as she learns to love herself others will love her...love...nalini