Saturday, March 19, 2016

Should Have Loved You Better Comments

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Close your eyes and savour the silence
It feels like death, reaching for your soul,
Breathing beautiful threats to a heart ever broken,
A dead beat which no longer means anything,
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Eunice Masumbuko
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Eunice Masumbuko 14 July 2016

thank YOU for the inspiring comment..... pleasure's all mine to be sharing personal feelings

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 July 2016

Close your eyes and savour the silence yes they are going to feel that they should have loved you better........ confronted with death, lack of love. sense of loss, pain, mental and physical....... all that you are conveying in a poetic way in imagination...... lovely write. thank you very much. tony

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Eunice Masumbuko

Eunice Masumbuko

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