Sunday, March 19, 2006

Should All Man's Exertions Come To Naught Comments

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Should all man's exertions and efforts come to naught
(as all are wont to do in time's vast flow)
crumbled with ages, fallen 'neath the sea, or so
totally lost through numerous means, existence fraught
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Hugh Cobb
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Anna Russell 20 March 2006

Blessed be indeed! Wonderfully uplifting advice we should all heed. Hugs Anna xxx

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kskdnj sajn 19 March 2006

Hugh this was a delight to read. May have been political, yet written so diverse for all man's exertions, much freedom in the crafted lines. :) Beautiful.

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Lamont Palmer 19 March 2006

Not a bad poem, but there's something conventional almost cliched about some of the lines. But it possessed a nice flow. -LP

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