Friday, October 23, 2015

Shot Poem- Emotional Affection Comments

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M. Asim Nehal
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Akhtar Jawad 24 October 2015

Yes, a thin line separates love and hate. When a child finds that his father, his brothers and his sisters are sharing his mother's love he learns the first lesson of jealousy and this jealousy if increases too much may go on the other side of that thin line. Again when is sufficiently socialized his ego plays its role. He starts thinking, it's my father, it's my brother and it's my sister. He comes back on the right side of this thin line.......................10

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T Rajan Evol 24 October 2015

Nice short poem with full of meaning, Thanks Asim and God bless u.

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Loke Kok Yee 24 October 2015

That's the spice of love! Thanks Asim-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2015

Deepy envisioned. An emotional love poem nicely presented. Thanks.

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