Wednesday, February 1, 2006

Shot In The Dark Comments

Rating: 4.0

The moon shone sorrowfully
In the middle of the night
A tree trembled with fright
As the wind whipped its branches
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NDIDI UBOGU
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 February 2006

I like the 'journey' but the ride is a bit 'bumpy! NDIDI? Check out the spelling on 'trenodies'..maybe it's right. The poem is a 'little' dark as intended...and yet, verifies that there is a power GREAT that does not allow evil! L

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