Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Shot Comments

Rating: 5.0

A mute of white swans
raft into dawn's blush
behind the blind's
hidden stare,
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 April 2016

Unaware! ! Nice work.

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Joshua Fegley 06 January 2013

Sucks to be the bird. Interesting poem.

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