Tuesday, September 13, 2005

Shostakovich In Nebraska Comments

Rating: 3.9

If I lived here
I would not find the cloud constructions
or the flattened topography remarkable.
I would not dwell on the broadband
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Michael Philips
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Stephen Parnell 22 December 2005

I think this is stunning. Simply wrought, yet with eloquence and poise. Regards, Stephen Parnell

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... ... 21 December 2005

andy's as good a judge of poems as any and his words on this are spot-on.

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Rich Hanson 13 September 2005

I enjoyed both of this evening's postings of yours, but preferred this poems evocative imagery to the stark despair of your dysfunctional family. The images really worked in the mind of this midwesterner.

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Uriah Hamilton 13 September 2005

Pretty much agree with the first two poets.

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Raynette Eitel 13 September 2005

I really love this one! My New York friends think there is nothing to America between Manhatten and Las Angeles. You have nailed that part of the country to a 'T.' I keep trying to put New Mexico on the map but hardly anyone listens. Well done. I especially love 'land of football and beef and easy handshakes.' Good folks there. Raynette

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