Tuesday, May 30, 2017

Shorty Shorty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Short stack, yep, that's me.
Being short is never who I wanted to be.
All my friends look down to see me,
and laugh when I try and stand tall.
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Crystal Pierce
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Bri Edwards 01 June 2017

don't let Bernard fool you, below in comment. age and height DOES matter, but there can be advantages as well as disadvantages to 'shortness', or, as my high school friend, Karl, a retired eye doctor, says to being altitudinally-challenged.....or something like that. oh, i think it is vertically-challenged! ...[later, i see you know the term] some favorite lines: But they are to tall to tell what I am saying at all...........BUT, look for a tiny typo here! ! ! and it takes to long to walk very far.....ooopS! ! ! same typo in this line. what does e mean here: 'You're e short! ' more favorite lines: To me, you are a giant stalking around, sending pulses, and shaking the ground. are you REALLY short? nice one. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Crystal Pierce 28 August 2017

I'm 5 foot even

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2017

Height like age doesn't really matter.... a big 10++++++

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Unnikrishnan E S 30 May 2017

Hi Chryssa, Beautiful poem.. A soliloquy by a short person.. A statement to the world at large.. Very good..10+++

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