Wednesday, September 16, 2020

Short Verse.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

short verse

bolete is a plant
comet is a shooting star
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

make a wish? that is the eternal superstition of man!

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

part 1 in this short verse we can find the codes that lead us to the pure message of the poet, when we find the link between bolete, comet, wish, eternal, superstition of man..

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Soran M. H 21 September 2020

part 2 each word here is a separate poem, containing very deep philosophy meanings, needs more reading and meditating, to find our selves in a suitable place either on the ground with plant or in the sky with stars, very well penned and poignant work, thanks and it deserves the top rank

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Sylvia Clinton 17 September 2020

You are right in one.

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