Tuesday, July 12, 2016

Short Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

Poem-1
Sweltering Summer
Concrete roads slither
A cuckoo coos
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Bharati Nayak
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 22 February 2020

A dark cloud hangs Golden sunrays scattered A rainbow appear... my nature poetess. Kudos to you. a lot of praises today. to you dear Bharati, tony

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Bri Edwards 10 January 2020

Ha Ha ha! ! ! i now see that i commented in 2018, and this already is in MyPoemList. time to look at another one. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 10 January 2020

#4 i'd say " appears" i enjoyed all five, but especially #2. it sounds inviting. maybe add a few slices of poetic pizza? ? to MyPoemList bri :)

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Fantone Mdala 08 May 2019

am liking the haiku style. Definitely, enjoyed these poems

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 07 May 2019

Most wonderful poem madam. Unbelievable. So beautiful.100++++++++++++

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

(cont.) i will keep in mind that you have single (?) Haikus in your list of poems here also. well, i see you DON'T specify that this Short Poems is haikus, but i think they are meant to be. bri ;)

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Bharati Nayak 29 July 2018

Thank you Bri Edwards or choosing this poem to your August Showcase.You rightly pointed out.I was trying to write Haiku and these poems were part of the process.

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Bri Edwards 28 July 2018

i enjoyed reading these and shall share them in my/(our) August 2018 showcase of poems on my PH site. Thanks! ! i have sent a long copied/pasted online description of 'Haiku' to you in a PH message. three lines, often about nature, rhyming or not, and can be read in one breath, etc. i'd say you did a fine job. to MyPoemList (cont.)

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Glen Kappy 15 July 2018

bharati, i wanted to read a poem or two by you this morning and just read these again. i like all of 1-3, like the choice of words, and the subtlety of nature-mind associations i can relate to. -glen

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Akhtar Jawad 31 December 2017

In every bitterness there is hidden a sweetness, so let us forget the bitterness and enjoy the sweetness. a great and amazing poem.

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Resh Kav 06 July 2017

A complete picture of true % pure nature. liked a lot.

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Glen Kappy 28 June 2017

bharati, i like your haiku, tanka, your short poems. you have a good feel for this kind of expression. on these short poems, i particularly like poem-2 and poem-3. i get poem-2 and think immediately of the last stanza of a poem of mine with the title the sun is lacking. in poem-3 i think of a cow- in ordinary life a large creature- who can find shade under a living thing that's bigger still. interesting to think of a tree as a nurturing thing. this comes to mind although it's not closely related to poem-3, the largest biological organisms on earth, from what i've read, are mycelial mats in the ground from which mushrooms grow. appreciatively, glen

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Edward Kofi Louis 03 October 2016

Spreading its branches. Nice work.

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Tom Billsborough 13 August 2016

A beautiful series of images about nature. I must say I had the same feeling as Susan, each successive poem giving me a new delight. There is such precision in your writing. Most enjoyable. Love short concise poems. Tom

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Valsa George 26 July 2016

All these short poems give us beautiful glimpses into Nature! Lovely write Bharati...! A sure 10

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Susan Williams 22 July 2016

When I finished Poem 1, I said this has got to be the best of show! ! ! Then I read Poem #2, and I said oh! this must be best of show- it is absolutely setting me out in the rain. Then I read poem #3, and saw the peace and quiet of the cow swishing its tail in the shade of a tree and I sighed happily and said, ahhhhhhh this is the best of show! Poem #4 flirted with me with its sunbeams and rainbows and then Poem #5 nailed me with its twilight.loveliness! ! ! ! Bharati- -you are the undisputed mistress of this form! ! ! 10+++++++++++++++

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 July 2016

dear Bharati, I've sent you a note by email Cheers F.

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Queeny Gona 14 July 2016

Anything through the eyes of Ms. Bharathi seems beautiful and amazing! And so are these beautiful short lines so sweet to fill the hearts of readers with bliss. Optimistic in view and captivating in thought!

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Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Your comments are really very encouraging, dear Queeny Gona Thank you very much..Stay blessed.

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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2016

Hi Bharati, Exquisite little poems, full of positivity. Of course, that is what your poems are about. Only Bharati can hear and enjoy a cuckoo cooing in Sweltering summer and slithering concrete roads. And only her poetic heart can see the twinkling stars in the sky, when everything disappears into the black hole of night. Her positive thinking tries to visualize a silver lining in every dark cloud. Very powerful poem. Fantastic imeages, speaking directly to the readers' heart.10++++

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Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Thank you for your feedback.It is really inspiring.

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* Sunprincess * 12 July 2016

....beautiful nature poems ★

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Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Your comments coming with a star fills my heart with much delight.I have read some of your poems.You are a great nature poet.Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem.

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M Asim Nehal 12 July 2016

Awesome! ! ! ! ! Very well written, I really enjoyed,10+++++

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Bharati Nayak 14 July 2016

Thank you so much for your words of appreciation.

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