Short Poem-10 Comments

Superb! ! ! ! The smell of moist air after rain is very dear to me.

Excellent. I love the smell of wet earth after a rain.

Bharati, I LIKE this, but I don't read, nor find that I like, much Haiku. This IS Haiku I believe! ;) bri p.s. somehow 'rain' is spelled 'raine' in the 'topics'.

A short poem but of great depth. I can feel the shower and the wet earth in your poem.

Wet earth at afternoon- great fresh smell of nature

Excellent work....thank u...

Sweet short poem dear Bharati with the lovely feel and fragrance of rain and mud......10

sudden shower creates very nicely smelling petrichor.

The summer showers one could smell in the poem. Beautiful haiku.

I could really smell the wet earth! This haiku was so well written. Amazing, thankyou.

Short and sweet one. Loved it.

Very nicely penned

I love the rain... when I am inside and dry. Very nice poem.