Wednesday, February 1, 2023

Short Poem - Voice Over Head Comments

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Deeply influenced mind drenched in hatred ~
guided by the unthought ideas.
To fulfil someone's wild dream ~
your voice is over the head.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Thoughtful!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

A deeply influenced mind is no mind at all. There is no cognition on what is right and what is wrong. A great succinct poem well crafted

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

A controlled mind can wreak havoc. Sadly manipulated minds are used for wicked designs. A great read!

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 02 February 2023

just superb

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Gordon Walter 02 February 2023

Very profound poem.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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