Thursday, February 2, 2023

Short Poem ~ Test Comments

Rating: 5.0

To test the true humanity in humans ~
Check their greed level.
And how they deal with down trodden
The truth will come up like cream on boiled milk.
...
Read full text

M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

So, greed is the characteristics of inhuman!

0 0 Reply
Nabakishore Dash 04 February 2023

Three cheers for this nice test.Excellent.

0 0 Reply
Nosheen Irfan 03 February 2023

Love the simile in the last line. You make wisdom and poetry go well together. Kudos!

1 0 Reply
Juhaina Tumlu 03 February 2023

No one can supress truth no matter what they do.

1 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 02 February 2023

excellent metphor

2 0 Reply
Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

So very true. We could see their true colors with these these tests. A brilliant and well thought out write. Liked these words; like cream on boiled milk

2 0 Reply
Suzon Albert 02 February 2023

True test and last line sums up all.

2 0 Reply
M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

Nagpur
Close
Error Success