Short Poem - Pain Comments

A work which anyone will envy short and meaningful.

Yes! Like a mirage. Great work! !

Body suffers from the pain caused by wounds of body and heart suffers from the pain caused by wounds of soul.....beautifully written.....thank you for sharing :)

That's so true. In life our every attempt is to gain a sense of achievement n for this purpose we can endure physical n spiritual pains. Good work.

Superb....The body suffers pain and torture in hope to attain the solace of achievement which allures like a mirage.

Achievement is amazing as a flower that needs water to rise. The beauty requires good work.

Achievement is awesome as a flower that needs water to rise. The beauty requires good work.

Often achievement is as elusive as a mirage..... but still we are ready to endure any amount of pain for it! A Meaningful quatrain!

All our lives we must endure pain to attain happiness - NO PAIN NO GAIN as they say.. Thank you Asim.

We are willing to endure for what we find pure