Short Poem - On Relationship Comments

Yes turbulence is part and parcel of this life

Excellent excellent excellent choice of a metaphor. The smooth glide from line to line helped give it snap like the tip of a whip would give and the closing line could not have been better. Deceptively brief yet the lines were carrying an awesome weight. Top marks and on a fav list

A Beautiful short poem about " Relationship" एक छोटा सा शेर अर्ज़ करना चाहता हूँ जुदाइयाँ तो मुक़द्दर हैं फिर भी जान-ए-सफ़र, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चल के देखते हैं।। क्यूँ तन्हाईयों मे छोड़ कर रुसवा हो गए, कुछ और दूर ज़रा साथ चलते तो मज़ा आ जाता।। 100%%+

Sky clear sometimes, the sky clouded.......fine....thank u, dear poet......anjandev roy.

Under the umbrella of the sky! ! ! ! Relationships. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Reasons needs to be assessed.

They are mirror of self. Keep checking.

Reasons are several yet one should choose wisely

Relationship that values are always respected rest all forget as dust over shoes They were never important nor will they value you.