Wednesday, October 27, 2021

Short Poem ~ In Taoist Style Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every bone holds a story of our restless mind
The complex pattern tells many a thing
The nature, the adaptation to change
The depth of our understanding
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 28 October 2021

Fantastic write of Taoist style Asim ...like it...full score

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Mamta 3 28 October 2021

Marvelous piece of writing. Full of wisdom.

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Bharati Nayak 27 October 2021

Every bone holds a story of our restless mind The complex pattern tells many a thing---A short and beautiful poem of great depth.

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Ricky Magnathen 27 October 2021

Excellent: The depth of our understanding And the rocks we moved while alive.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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