Tuesday, January 31, 2023

Short Poem ~ History Repeats Comments

Rating: 5.0

Monuments raised on sweats of the labourers ~
to glorify the pride of the Kings.
It is not the story of exploitation of labourers ~
And history repeats time and again.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Anjandev Roy 03 April 2025

This is brilliant short work.... thank u... friend..

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Bharati Nayak 02 February 2023

All the tall buildings are built by the sweat of poor labourers! While rich people stay in towers, the labourers can not manage to build a hut for themselves.Your four line poem say this truth in so many words!

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Nosheen Irfan 02 February 2023

Marvelous poem! Couldn't agree more! History repeats itself and the labourers keep sweating and the kings keep getting honours. Well articulated!

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

Even in Canada we have sweat shops. And the fashion moguls are laughing all the way to the bank. And how depressing is it to have them exploiting the poor by making a fortune through distressed jeans.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 01 February 2023

exact your observation on history; nice to read

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Martinez Salotori 31 January 2023

Sublime poem. It is not the story of exploitation of labourers ~ And history repeats time and again.

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Poetic Sky 31 January 2023

In power game mighty rules, take the case of US against Afghan/Iraq or Russia against Ukraine....

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Poetic Sky 31 January 2023

Who cares about the source they all see the product. Kings wraps it up by putting their mark on the sweats of the poor labourers, Call is fate, destiny whatever you wish to but History repeats time and again, Well written poetry short and meaningful in today's context.

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Aarzoo Mehek 31 January 2023

Aur yehi hota rahega Asim. Gehri baat kehdi.

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Richard Wlodarski 01 February 2023

Translation please, Poet Mehek.

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2023

Last two lines are the highlight...yes, it's true that history is repeated...short and cute poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 January 2023

I agree with Dillip but we cannot forget

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2023

Yes it's true. History is repeated time and again. Appreciated the underlying implications of this excellent write. Full marks.

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