Tuesday, June 22, 2021

Short Poem ~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

A country had the curse, all rulers will be a Moron.
There came a saint who advised people,
To pray for the King to become Wise,
They all joined him to pray collectively,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Brilliant work.

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Deepak S S 24 June 2021

Wah wah. gr88888

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Sandra Feldman 24 June 2021

Great truth in this poem of most countries political curse. We all have our worthless kings although changed with more frequency than they are worth.

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Michael Jack 23 June 2021

Smart move to get rid of moron kings.

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Ricky Magnathen 23 June 2021

Very tricky poem. The prayer was heard and soon the King died.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 June 2021

Brilliantly said, and very educative, a true satyrical brevity, as I said BRILLIANT! 5 Stars Full

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Anjandev Roy 22 June 2021

Excellent work.....wisely written...

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Shreya Hacks 22 June 2021

Ha ha ha......Lesson learnt 'Where MORONS are blessed never pray for improvement in situation' Great satire on leaders of the world.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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