Short Poem ~ 15 Comments

'He stood out against the sky Saw life crawling like a tortoise And death hovering like an eagle.'.....brilliant write, , , , ,5*****

Saw life crawling like a tortoise And death hovering like an eagle....Brilliant...10

Awesome! dear Asim ji! Vivid images through this poem - more fascinating than even a movie!

......like an eagle.....excellent.....

Succinct poem, Nicely written, FS

From the skies, life on earth would seem to crawl.

So beautiful. A philosophical write nicely worded. Loved it.