Friday, March 8, 2019

Short Poem 1 Comments

Rating: 5.0


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M. Asim Nehal
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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2019

Keeping hands side by side is nice and walking along with has great vision. Romance is like summer breeze. This is very interesting....10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 March 2019

The use of simile in the first line makes the poem endearing! A short and sweet romantic poem!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2019

A 10++++++++++++++++++++for the ratings/votings, Asim. This poem deserves that.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 March 2019

WOW! Mesmerizing poem, looks Summer here, but we still have the COLD winter. I have enjoyed amazingly, dear Asim. So imaginable are your words. I like most your concluding words. WOW! Romance is in the air at your place.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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