Thursday, August 4, 2016

Short Nessie (Part Three) Comments

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Nessie

Across the bay where Nessie sleeps
I feel that eyes are watching me
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Annette Aitken
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Terry Craddock 13 January 2017

'Across the bay where Nessie sleeps' I babysit her babies while Nessie sleeps, she opens her to watch me from time to time with watery peeps; :) why she trusts me is a mystery; enjoyed the poem, got carried away.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2016

Mystery! ! With the ways of life. Thanks for sharing.

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Tom Billsborough 11 August 2016

I agree with Judith. Mystery is all and Nessie keeps us guessing. Long may she do so! Good work, Annette.

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