Short Lyrics (Sixteen-Characters） Comments

Upset- / to rush around ever blind, / as Time flows away / traceless. [- - Now this is a demonstration of the power inherent in brevity when the image is painted vividly with the exact right words. Well-done, Perdita! ! ! !

Scenery of season motivates mind and we easily perceive nature with thought ad perception. A nice poem is beautifully penned...10

Such a beautiful poem! Thank you!

Perdita, such a heartwarming poem......10++++++

Well expressive poem with lovely theme. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.