Wednesday, February 21, 2007

Short Love Story Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a story I'd like to tell you
It seems like only yesterday
About a girl who loved so blindly
Chapter one starts out this way
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I M Swan
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Catastrophe King 23 February 2007

You write with an effect that stays. A sad story - a common story of broken hearts! You have narrated the much-told story in a very simple style - yet so impressive! A complete 10 with an applause.

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