Short. Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

Short.

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes I want to cry,
Then I see you looking at me,
So I tell my tears goodbye.

Sometimes you can kill a creature,
Wondering how you can look fondly at another,
Life has a way of fitting things together.

Sunday, January 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: contemplation,fear,life and death,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 13 January 2020

A wonderfully written amazing poem.......10+++

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Safiyyah Manjra 14 January 2020

Thank you Sir Asuncion, for a moment I thought I lost all critique on my poems!

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