Wednesday, November 23, 2022

Shores Of My Heart❤️ Comments

Rating: 5.0

Between the shores of my heart
under the flowing lustrous holy river
where the white dove of wishes
floats on the chariot of stars
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M. Asim Nehal
COMMENTS
Bri Edwards 27 November 2022

Well, Asim, you've requested I read the poem and I have. I shall leave a comment or two now and may come again if you reequest it again. I don't care usually for love poems, nor do I care usually for symbolism.

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M. Asim Nehal 29 November 2022

Many thanks for honouring my request.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 26 November 2022

What a wonderful poem! Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2022

Congratulations for your appearance on the 100 List of Best Poems of Member Poets of PH. To my Favourites

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Sylvia Frances Chan 26 November 2022

You have had a thousand days sleep, now awakan again with this marvelous wonderful romantic narrative about LIFE,5 Stars TOP Score and myriad more, dear Dr. M. Asim Nehal Sir

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M. Asim Nehal 16 May 2023

Thanks much Madam....

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Juhaina Tumlu 24 November 2022

Very hopeful poem 'Millions of joy will remove the fatigue And the scent will be carried by the wind.' great lines

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Nabakishore Dash 24 November 2022

Great metaphors are used by u dear Dr.Nehal.

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S H 24 November 2022

I make a bridge of love to drink From the intoxicated lips of fate........Philosophy of life in a different way.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 24 November 2022

Pure poetry nicely conceived and written, after long gap welcome back.

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M. Asim Nehal

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