Sunday, September 29, 2013

Shore Of Hope Comments

Rating: 4.0

I'll dive into the sea of your tears
Save you from drowning and dying there
I'll take you to the shore of hope
Dry your eyes and calm your fears
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JR Cuyam
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Thomas Adams 05 October 2013

Nice flow - its a good read, Bard.

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Heather Wilkins 29 September 2013

a message from a true friend. lovely work good usage of words. excellent 10+

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Matt Mooney 29 September 2013

Brilliant.I love it.10.

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Dinesan Madathil 29 September 2013

Eight lines of an omniscient optimism surging forward. Great write Cuyam. Go ahead

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