Saturday, April 5, 2014

Shore Comments

Rating: 5.0

As sands meditate smoothly,
Breathing scents of palms,
Glossy rays touch the ocean-
Heavy
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Areese Woodson
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Khairul Ahsan 13 April 2014

You have drawn a picture perfect scenario of the shore you have in your mind, and we all can see that through your poetic words. Very well written, it was a pleasure to read this short but perfect poem. I have rated it 10/10.

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Areese Woodson

Areese Woodson

Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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