Shooting Star...(I Wish) Comments

This poem showed a sad & lonely & unhappy child who shows love & love.

I wish you the best of luck and this poem is very good I like it a lot :)

This is a good poem. I'm sorry bout your dad.

i think is really good i feel that way most of the time but i feel that life goes on and even that painfull chapter of your life can and has help u become what you are today things happen for a reason and thats desteny read my poems i just have 6 but u know im only 15 i dont have nothing to write about but i will try to write more bye and good poem luv miriam porras

so many people feel this way. you are an amazing poet. there is also a great story and great passion and emotion behind it.

i'm sorry about ur dad but i love the poem.

good job..and im really sorry about your dad. he must have been a great man

Straight to the point Good work Nooruddeen

this poem shows true meaning.

KEEPING YOU FROM HARM'S HANDS

I CAN FEEL YOUR MISERY. BUT TRULY LIFE IS A MYSTERY. HE'S WATCHING YOU FROM THE SKY. HE WANT YOU TO BE HAPPY DON'T CRY. HE'S NOW YOUR GUARDIAN ANGEL. KEEPING FROM HARM'S HANDS &DANGER. VERY TOUCHING POEM AND I AM SORRY FOR YOUR DAD.

lovely poem, great work

Love the poem wow so nice but sad it deserves a 10+

i wish i could feel your tragedies... but well, , , its tragedies...

now don't get upset with me. I am a very critical writer. This poem to me lacked how you truly felt. it was a little too simple. when you write poetry try to put a few similes to help us better understand your longing and loss. it was a little too straight to the point and lacked an artistic flow in my mind. just trying to give you some creative criticism.

Well some wishes can only be wishes well then again its a wish

very well put in understandable way. sorry for your grief.

Hi Jose this is a very fine poem, that alot of people can relate to, I think you captured all the emotions of your grief and communicated them to the reader very well, and I think your father would be proud of your tribute to him,10.

the caps made my eyes hurt! ! ! but other than that it was sweet :)

man this poem makes me wish i had a dad