Friday, April 17, 2009

Shooting Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

I look outside for one last glance,
at the big blue sky with stars so bright,
looking for a dream to come true, I see a shooting star vanish into the moon,
quick make a wish, your dream will come true,
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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Tenderly spoken piece, gives the whole poem a magical touch...lovely to read....keep exploring

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Brandon w 29 May 2009

its a sweet poem.I like it.

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