Thursday, July 9, 2009

Shooting Star Comments

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Staring up at the star lit sky,
Watching each star light up with every sigh,
Seeing how bright each star is,
Nothing could be better than this.
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Ocean Myranda
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It is a beautiful poem.

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It is a beautiful original thinking and nice also.

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Ocean Myranda 14 July 2009

thanks guys... idk bout the making it come true now but you know how it can be...thanks for your comments tho! !

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Ted M 10 July 2009

A wish you made came true.

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Stephen Stirk 09 July 2009

A kind of magical mysticism in here. The power of a wish. I like the imagery of the shooting star. Best Steve

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