Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Thursday, August 27, 2009

Shooting Pigeon Comments

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Can any one think of shooting pigeon or sparrow?
With any of the edged weapon or pointed arrow?
Would you ever think of throwing stone at house of neighbor?
Do you think it worthwhile to make futile labor?
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Venkat Ramanna 15 October 2009

Can any one think of shooting pigeon or sparrow? With any edged weapon or pointed arrow?

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Sagarika Shah 06 September 2009

Can any one think of shooting pigeon or sparrow? With any edged weapon or pointed arrow? Would you ever think of throwing stone at neighbour? .....10

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Marieta Maglas 01 September 2009

nice realistical poem, nice rhymes, lovely to read.................10++++++

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Lady Grace 30 August 2009

ouuccchhhh...keeeooonnnn.......

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Joseph Poewhit 28 August 2009

Keep a stiff upper lip - as the British say.

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Edwina K 27 August 2009

Not to sit idle and not to go for rest Strong resolve at heart and all cards to chest...10

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Sadia Hussain 27 August 2009

With any edged weapon or pointed arrow? Would you ever think of throwing stone at neighbour.......10

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Ramdulari Sinha 27 August 2009

Are we creating impossible things to live? Do we not aim higher and in goals believe.......10

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Sita Kesri 27 August 2009

Would you ever think of throwing stone at neighbour? Do you think it worth to make futile labour? ............10

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Nagesh Ratnavelu 27 August 2009

Can any one think of shooting pigeon or sparrow? With any edged weapon or pointed arrow? ...........10

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Sunita Rao 27 August 2009

Are we creating impossible things to live? Do we not aim higher and in goals believe.........10

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Severina Dsouza 27 August 2009

If answer is yes then think of always good No retaliation even if beaten with wood........10

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Indani Narayan 27 August 2009

Immediate steps to position and ward off It is human nature not be little sluggish............10

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Lalvani Rekha 27 August 2009

Do you think it worth to make futile labour? ................10

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Vijay Suwarnkar 27 August 2009

Why we dislike displeasure and show through nose? Threats are instantly eliminated before they pose.............10

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Sulochna Pandit 27 August 2009

It is human nature not be little sluggish................10

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Raju Rajput 27 August 2009

This may look strange and little funny Greatness and nobility can’t be achieved with money No bees may store drops of honey Still it happens and we don’t raise bogey...............10 very good indeed

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Jigisha Vyas 27 August 2009

No one attempts at without any purpose Why don’t you send stone in stead of rose? Why we dislike displeasure and show through nose? Threats are instantly eliminated before they pose.............10

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Maulin Shah 27 August 2009

With any edged weapon or pointed arrow? Would you ever think of throwing stone at neighbour.........10

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Suwarna Patil 27 August 2009

We may not follow and good ideas repeal.............10

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