Shoot To Kill! ! Comments

Akusenamvikeli womphakathi la eNingizimu Afrika. Sekusele izigcwelegcwele nje eziqedana zodwa bese zifaka nathi phakathi. Inkinga iningi ligijimela ebuphoyiseni ngenxa yokuswelakala kwemisebenzi. Alisayi ngoba linothando lokuvikela umphakathi.

really a great narration of the deplorable situation of a society which should be condemned..........a great poem.........

I felt the piece Siya. Deeply touched by it. Great thought!

I was so touched by this poem. I felt your anguish as you put the words to the keyboard. You have such a way to express truth. Please, be careful. Sending blessings of protection to surround you.....hugs

Great poem Ntate, im ver touched, very sad coz dis is going on and on. I heard the story of the young boy and could not believe what had happened, now they are covering up by saying the killer is unfit? Great story dat needs to be told, great poem.Great poem Ntate, im ver touched, very sad coz dis is going on and on. I heard the story of the young boy and could not believe what had happened, now they are covering up by saying the killer is unfit? Great story dat needs to be told, great poem.

Well written, sad poem. This is still happening around the world. I hope it will change. poems like this can help. I pray that we can change, change the world. I think poetry can be powerful. Let us go on and inspire the world.

Smartly well described and well scripted, fully thoughtful and engrossing, I like it.

My friend this was the most image full poem I have ever read.! It was disturbingly beautiful! ! I was angry and loved it at the same time. I'm getting the chancenow to read all your work I'm sure I will enjoy everything..

Blunt! Honest! Brutal! ! No I love you's here! ! My brother...you are a true patriot! ! ! Excellent work.The mediocre and the criminal minded are in charge of our lives.No time for to hide...The truth is our eternal search.I am proud of you! Keep the spear burning! ! The boers killed Biko and the others and they thought they were silencing the truth and they failed...dismally! Now our own are killing our prophets and they will fail...dismally too.Keep the spear burning bright!

As an African I identifies with this piece. How corruption has eaten into many structures of the nation, if not all. It is sad when you see few men using these structures for their selfish interest. This poem hits exactly on these issues and your style is also good. Good write.

the picture, both sad and horrific, and it's going on around the world! justice has become a mockery!

I really like to read political poems. Well written though the theme is very sad. Stand against the discrimination!

Wow, a truly powerful poem, with a story that needs to be told. A great write.

When power used to de-power others it seems powerless at all...one day what i said will be true when the one who guilty cant find a way to hide from truth...once they be a bad they will do more, once they do more, enemy will around the wall...and then it will find the time where truth is reclaim the victory for innocent people he kills...hope we can go change to be better people to make better world...as world is nothing but a place to live with love and peace_Unwritten Soul