Shoddy Path Poem by Saroj Padhi

Shoddy Path

Rating: 5.0


Is this the beauty of our society
where ‘love' is a dirty word
meaning mostly the body
under a mind so shoddy
sex, an accursed being
in affairs oft' shady!
Are we the children of God
to rot like faded flowers
under thoughts so muddy?
Here relationships are either good or inimical
No in-between tolerance zone
Between differences mutual
in the path of our journey
to a place all weird and dark
in company of the bloody

Wednesday, August 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: path
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 05 August 2020

In the most sensible approach, the poem deals with an important subject which, even now, is considered a taboo in our society despite claims of being modern in many ways. I like this poetic treatment of the topic though in its limited scope. Thanks for sharing the poem which should provoke a discussion.

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