Monday, April 14, 2008
Shock And Awe (War Politics) Comments
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The liar’s babes bubbles in growth
within womb of all mankind
mothers first to sense, groan -
of pumping corpses into minds.
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7/24/2025 6:12:41 PM # 1.0.0
You state a strong case my friend But I assume you want honest critiqueIMHO you would do better to stick to stanzas of the same length Throughout and try a little harder with your rhyming Growth and groan. Slant rhyme only You fourh stanza of five lines changes your rhyme pattern completely/ Only suggestions to be heeeded or discarded ivor