Shivoham Comments

this poem is written with finesse.

Shivoham is the ultimate realization in life, so succinctly articulated by the poet,

Each time i read this poem, i love it even more!

Beautiful piece of poetry. It’s mesmerizing.

the blissful state of permanent peace so eloquently penned. nice work!

The essence of monotheism so beautifully articulated in a short poem. Perfect 10

crisply written poem with so much soul packed into it.

the line my dance gives the boson its mass brings it home for me.

shivoham - a state of bliss and one with the universe is so aptly captured in this short muse.

mesmerizing poetry written with such a vivid imagination.

Lovely write and has a silky quality to it. I like all your poems very much!

I was so moved by the simplicity and the beauty of the words in this poem to describe the highest state of spiritual evolution.

The prisitine state of shivoham is so eloquently highlighted by this young man.

Profound, succinct and brilliantly delivered

Love this poem. It has a magical quality to it.

each word chosen with precision like a diamond cutting through glass

I love your collection of poems on Shiva. Another terrific one.

just one word for this poem: Brilliant!

What a marvelous poem. I love He diction and the pace of the poem.