Monday, August 24, 2015

Shivering Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Will be back soon,
said the full moon,
but she took a month,
and
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kelly Kurt 24 August 2015

~~I too would like to see the original. But this one speaks nicely as well

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 August 2015

I wish I could read your original poem, just to compare. Anyway, it's a beautiful poem..................10

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Sanjukta Nag 24 August 2015

Very nice poem.. though it's daytime but the poem makes me see a sky full with stars and a crescent moon. Good thought that stars had to face a too dark night without the moon.. & the title is beautiful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 August 2015

Full moon has given promise to come back soon. Bright milky ways will be pilgrims. Dropping of darkness will adore light with such an interesting and amazing imagery. Very beautiful poem shared really. Interesting...10

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