a black cobra
with a raised hood
slithers
around his blue neck
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I love how even the atom comes to a standstill to catch a peek of the great Shiva.
Wow. Your poetic image is stunning. I understand that Shiva is a part of the Hindu triumvirate, but the half-smile as well as the snake make me a bit unsettled and wondering. Is this intentional? But then the speaker writes of pure compassion. Your present interesting juxtapositions between humans and the Gods. I enjoyed reading. Thanks.
Great write, i shiver at the thought of a cobra around shiva's neck! then again it is the great Shiva who cares for all beings.
A perfect 10. Spirt and life come together so well in this magical poem.
Brilliant writing and vivid imagery. A truly superb poem.
What a beautiful poem on the great Shiva. I was in tears reading it.
Beautiful poem signifying power of lord Shiva. Loved it.10++++