Wednesday, February 23, 2005

Shirley Comments

Rating: 3.5

A tender love forever left unspoken
My one true desire was to smell her feet
Her presence always comforting
and smile to die for gratifying as ever
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Sean Furlong
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Poetry Hound 23 February 2005

Smelling her feet certainly caught my attention. Afraid it was all downhill after that. At least you didn't mention her soul. Oh, wait a minute, you did. REALLY downhill.

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Sean Furlong

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