Thursday, May 29, 2008

Ships Ahoy(Ma Boy!) Comments

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Welcome aboard the moving sphere,
All ye destinations be here;
Underneath a dense field of nothingness.
Ye will build ye own shield in emptiness,
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Nkululeko Mdudu
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Mathew Lewis 04 June 2008

I think this is probably one of your best. Excellent excellent poem from the rhyme and meter all the way through to the imagery metaphor and concept. Yup. Very very good

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