Thursday, July 30, 2009

Ships Comments

Rating: 5.0

I passed the dawn to reach the night
As the ship sailed softly away.
It caught the clouds in its swelling sails
As the sailors screamed goodbye,
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Aaron Priestly
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Patrick McFarland 30 July 2009

This is a terrific poem Aaron. It captures a bitter sweet moment in time, leaving ones comfortable surroundings to sail off into adventure and the unknown.10+

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