On the high seas of life, with no compass
for direction.
Held prisoner by emotion in my mental
insurrection.
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This is a piece that many can relate to. Keep hope alive, and faith will never let you down. Once again, the clouds will roll back, and the light shall brightly shine through.
Life is a painful business for many - well expressed sentiment.
We all have a shipwreck in life. Nice feeling poem. Now I say raise that ship from the depths of despair. I am working on raising my ship right now, difficult, but not impossible. Write a poem of salvage! Salvage what is lost and sail again in the mighty winds of life!
Tis well written, expressive and appealing. Read mine - A Small Ship - Adeline